The Devastation

by Peter
(Brisbane)

a sweet poem

a sweet poem

It started one morning and i forgot my lunch for school and i was starveing all day i had no food and when i got home i was skin and bones so thats my story thanks for reading

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AHAHAHA
by: Anonymous

LOLZ THAT WAS THE BEST, GOOD JOB

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I hate you
by: Anonymous

That was a really mean thing to do, cyclone tracy is a serious topic and you are making fun of it. I lost my child because of it. He was nice but you're not and you deserve to be killed in a cyclone!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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stupid evil *******
by: Anonymous

HOW MEAN OF YOU TO MOCK PEOPLE AND THE CYCLONE!!!!!!!!! THIS WAS SO HORRIBLE!!! I HATE PEOPLE LIKE YOU. I LOST MY MUM AND MY LITTLE SISTER IN THAT CYCLONE AND I WAS ONLY 7 AT THE TIME!!!


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Angry
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How could you be so horrible! Teasing people for getting hurt by cyclone Tracy! All my school friends think you desurve to get hit by a cyclone to see how you feel!

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by: Anonymous

was tht sposed 2 b funni, if it was tht wasnt funni at all... tht was lame and this site is for ppl hu have been thru cyclone tracy

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